
My first response is, wow! On the surface, I really like it and think it's pretty good for a beginner (well, except for the hair, I have not a clue how to do hair!). I give myself good marks!
BUT ...
There's a lot of problems with it, all of which point to my lack of basic skills which I never bothered to learn. Let's look!
Ok the hair sucks, whatever, I've never done a portrait before, no idea how to do hair, I'll learn.
Anatomy: it's off. The ear is wrong, the pupils aren't centered, the bottom of the nose is a mess (which is why it's cut here) the forehead is quite problematic ( though better than it was; he had a Klingon one for a while).
Value and Color: the real problem. Check back at the reference photo; the left side of the portrait is ok, but the right side is waaaaaay off, he's not in that much shadow and the color is made up in my head I guess, and badly at that. I made it way too dark. The color is off and my pencil technique is without direction.
So. Yay! it's a really good starting point, gauge, what have you. Yay! I can draw.
I HAVE GOT TO LEARN MY BASICS, how many times do I need to repeat that? Just because I can draw doesn't mean I can do it well. Learn something!
So I'm gonna. I've signed up for an online course about shading and values, which I'll start in the next couple of days. Plus I found this free online comp,eye drawing course, with critiques! that I'm also going to focus on soon.
So I'm putting away the color for the time being, and starting at the bottom.
I'll have more stuff, plus details on the courses, up here soon!















